1. 然而，由於钟氏在其小说中往往陷於个人情感之细腻描述，而其个人情感偏又呈现著卑懦、犹疑、徬徨、消极的基调，致使其情节脉络显得繁杂、驳乱，连带削弱其主题思想的批判力度。
In his novels, however, his detailed description of him, who was indulged in personal affection that tends to be coward, hesitant, and negative, messes up his plots and context and weakens his criticism of thematic ideas.